Declaimer: Blah..blah...blah..you know the rest. I don't own Luigi,
the Boos, Mario, and etc. They all go to Nintendo.
This is just another shot of my writing.
Author's Note: I'm gonna modify the story
from Luigi's Mansion. So don't be surprised if it doesn't
correspond to the game. But, I am gonna use some parts that they did not
had in the
official release. ^_~ Enjoy!
Chapter 1: Luigi Claims His Grant Price
It was a pretty warm day, considering the fact that it was about
late October. The blended
colors of comfort and joy were kissing the tress goodbye until the
time of rebirth would
take its course. Their unified beauty flowed within the crisp wind
of the coming winter as
they touched every roof in the Mushroom Kingdom. It was chilly outside,
yet it didn't
keep him from staying home. It was never known, that this decision
he had just made,
was about to challenge his life that he will never forget.
" This is great! I would've never though of ever being so lucky!
" The tall plumber in
green, also known as the eternal undercover Luigi, was walking down
the path that would
lead him to his new home. He and his older brother Mario, who was
in deed, the very
well known hero of the Mushroom Kingdom, live together in a reasonable
most of the time, he found himself left behind when Mario was called
upon saving the
kingdom from its eternal enemy, King Bower Koopa. Before he left
his current residence,
Luigi informed Mario about the incredible news in the mail.
*~*~*~ couple hours ago~*~*~*
" Mario? This is Luigi. Guess what! I've won myself a real mansion!
Isn't it neat? "
breathed Luigi against the phone, as he excitedly paced around the
house. " Anyway, I'd
like to go check it out. So, would you mind joining me? "
" You sound very happy, little brother, " chuckled Mario on the
other end in the
" Of course I do! Well, wouldn't you be, if you opened your mailbox
and found out that
you won something really, " he thought for a moment, " unusual?
" Maybe Waluigi's pulling you leg again. Like last time when you
were granted a special
flower that turned out to be a piranha plant. " The image of the
vicious plant popping out
of the wrapped box appeared in his mind. " Ha! You should've seen
your face! It was
priceless! " Mario acted out Luigi's gapping expression and was
now head over banging
on the desk, laughing like a maniac, while Luigi slightly turned
red of embarrassment.
" Hahaha.....very funny, " commented Luigi
sarcastically. " How was I supposed to
know?! You didn't notice it either! " He was still laughing and
Luigi gave in and joined
him at the joke.
" If you're wondering about where the place is, it's supposed to
be near Forever Forest."
There was a pause and this bothered Luigi a little. " Mario? "
" How'd you get the mansion anyway? "
" Oh, a contest, " replied Luigi with ease. " Listen, let's talk
about it later. I've got the
soup boiling over here! I'll see you at the mansion! Bye! " *Hangs
People around Toad Town told numerous stories about the purple jungle
of eternity. The
trees of at this spot grew very close to each other. And because
the leaves were so thick,
nameless and unknown species housed this habitat, who loved the
darkness and night air.
Regardless of how sunny or hot the day would be, Forever Forest
was the home of
sovereign silence. It was the perfect place for the dead to scare
the life out of victims.
Though some get lucky, most people that would enter this forest
would easily get lost and
this is exactly what happened to our hero of this tale.
" Hooot--hoot-hoot. " echoed the feathered night, along with the
rustling of deceased
leaves, that ripped apart from the smiling trees.
The glance of light reluctantly died away with every step he took,
as the younger brother
walked deeper and deeper into the forest. Without the presence of
another person, Luigi
became aware of the uncomfortable pressure of his complaining heart.
" Why....do I
have this feeling, that someone or something is watching me? " He
stopped for a moment
and looked around. All he could see were black trees whose greedy
fingers were waving
some of the dense bushes.
This place needs light and some serious cutting! I can barely see my hand!
up his glove, and despite the white coloring, it was still too dark to see!
across the sky, which caused Luigi to clutch his emerald green hat.
don't like this forest! Maybe, ....I should've gone with Mario," whimpered
I'll be fine. I...hope. It wouldn't surprise me if Mario got lost too. I
can do this!
my compass doesn't work! " urged the plumber to himself, as his body continued
path. However something was strange. The compass was spinning like crazy
it was unable to point its location. It was as if the forest itself, forbid
the use of
pulled out a map and placed his finger on an area that was defined as Forever
There was a path leading out just beyond a barrier of thorns. " If I am not
this will lead me up to the mansion. All right! I can finally-" *KNACK*
a cracking noise vibrated the lone air behind him. "What? " He spun around
as quickly as it came, it faded away. He shifted his head to the right and
he was searching for something in the greenery. A weary feeling overcame him
fastened his pace on a dirty trail. Again, the rustling returned and it
second passing by. Luigi made no doubt and command his shoes to make a run.
right! Something appeared out from the dark! By the heavy hammering it gave
and the filled breathing, Luigi could imagine the creature that was eying
claws and razor sharp teeth that were stained with the blood of its last
when it had its last meal? It surely would be overjoyed to put its grip
plumber. It roared the vision of a nightmare in attempt to frighten the young
didn't dare to scream, not because he would look like a "fraity cat", but
to attract more attention from other unwanted company.
hadn't glued his eyes, he would've realized that he was dashing right into
thorns. " Ah!!! Oh no! " screamed Luigi as he
crossed his arms to protect his face
against the pile of green needles. His body popped out of the forest and
over onto the cold ground.
pushed himself up and expected the beast to break through the thorns.
enough, it didn't! The yell was gone, the noise, the image, it all disappeared!
reached up to his racing heart. * WHAT IN THE WORLD WAS THAT?! *
Luigi in his mind.
" W~E~E~G~I~E....!! " An eerie scream rang in
" M- Mario?
" trembled the young hero at the abnormal sound.
as he thought that the commotion could not get any worse, the screeching
that flew past his nose, heated his brain once again.
" Luigi stumbled over and eyed the bird that nestled itself on a dried branch
another raven. " Is this? Oh no! Give me a break! " He was now looking at
behind the birds. It was a large gloomy mansion on top of an abandoned
A silvery moon howled at this discovery along with the fading yell of Mario's
The trees were now more than happy to greet their visitor since the birth
supposed to be his grant price? An ancient building in the middle of a freaky
It must be a dream! No, it wasn't a dream! It was a nightmare that became
you liked it. I had fun writing this! To tell the truth, I put this together
night time. -_-. Now wasn't this perfect timing?
Anyway, should I continue
I am not so sure because, I am a little too heavy on descriptions. Or is
happy to hear some opinions. ^-^